Are there any Creative/Poem writers out there? - wedding program thank you poem
I'm trying to write a little poem for my friend. He and I are still married in a few months and with the College in the semester, and therefore simply not had time to sit down and write a poem for our wedding program! You should know that if I fell in love with him because he so imperfect! It was no ordinary man! He stood in the crowd to its originality! His smile, laugh, walk, how we think, dress, smell, size, etc. as you love / treatment of women
Heeeelp PLEASE! THANK YOU!
Saturday, January 23, 2010
Wedding Program Thank You Poem Are There Any Creative/Poem Writers Out There?
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The nights that I wake up thinking that your imperfections
So numerous and very little, you make me some ideal.
I never wanted to be better than
Although now all I want you,
With such ease that you have in my heart
The Long and Winding Road, that our love is gone that far.
The area of passion and love we receive in our hearts
You're the one for me, alone in our love, we are one.
It's really not that bad.
I write poems, and what I do is go online and watch the inspiring work of others. Then I see his ideas, and do not take it, but I see a certain choice of words and work in my poem.
What if you see someone put "my love for you is like the sun-earth-inevitable," then perhaps write my love for you is inevitable, I can not stop "or something like that. How can you love the word inevitable ... so that the work you (to participate in ur poem can use if you wish. GOOD LUCK
(not divorced) jkjk haha good chance Tho
Tips:
a good poem is always in the hearts of the Uruguay Round.
always listen to ur heart because she is always right:)
UR friend loves the most, if u wrote UR heart:)
to break you into little lines and is a masterpiece of the heart. Must come from you and you done well. Here is an example of what I mean, use it if you want it:
Never dreamnt for you to be
... imperfect.
I have never asked
Perfect.
I never asked to be
may be higher than
.......... You are here:
Angelic
...... and
.............. Inhuman.
Oh yes,
[Search for her] place in my heart ...
EASY
We found the small kingdom ....
..... ..... our passion
(Points, before the words used to describe a depression that does not allow this format that free points.)
to break you into little lines and is a masterpiece of the heart. Must come from you and you done well. Here is an example of what I mean, use it if you want it:
Never dreamnt for you to be
... imperfect.
I have never asked
Perfect.
I never asked to be
may be higher than
.......... You are here:
Angelic
...... and
.............. Inhuman.
Oh yes,
[Search for her] place in my heart ...
EASY
We found the small kingdom ....
..... ..... our passion
(Points, before the words used to describe a depression that does not allow this format that free points.)
I think we're on the right track. One way to determine the imperfection of the writing was on the lines of:
Others can see that you are far from perfect
But girl I think you're perfect for me
... the fact that the "deficiencies" that the ideal is not the same as the defects in his heart ... and imperfections are what make this an ideal, and therefore for you. Shakespeare's Sonnet 130, the view of man, but you might want to consider as a reference. Here:
The eyes of my friend "are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lips red;
When snow is white, why then her breasts are brown;
If the hair is the son, the black son grow on his head.
I saw damask'd pink, red and white
But I see these roses in her cheeks;
And is the joy in some perfumes there is more
This breath, as my lover smells.
I like to hear, but I also know
This music has a much more pleasant;
I confess that I never saw a goddess go;
My wife, when she walks, walks on the field:
And yet, by God, I think my love as rare
How to compare all the lie with false
... This could easily be re-written from their perspective, and if you keep it (to the sonnet form even if it were) a good contact, under the circumstances and in view of the topic and time is neither here nor there. In any case, I hope that you have a few ideas.
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